The following is my final writing assignment, besides my final exam, for my current English class. As I was writing it I chuckled to myself as it pertains to the video :
The Story of Stuff by Annie Leonard that I had been thinking on earlier in the week. I am not sure if I have already endorsed this video in this blog, but even if I did it's worth a second mention. Enjoy the video, criticize the writing, and have a great week.
(sorry about the crazy alignment, I hope it's readable, I copied it from my Word program)
War Zone
We are in a war, and most of us are blissfully unaware of it. Every day we are
bombarded by images, slogans, and propaganda convincing us that we are in a great and
dire need for some product. We are constantly barraged by marketing techniques, so
much so, that we do not even notice it anymore.
My first experience with this battle came when I was eleven years old. My mother
and I went shopping for new bathing suits. I found a bright red one piece with the cursive
curly script of Coca-Cola running all through it. I loved it; it appealed to all of my
senses. My mother, thinking nothing of it, bought it for me. I wore that bathing suit
proudly for about three weeks. Then, one summer day, we were going swimming. We
had to make a stop at my grandparent’s house first. I proudly flounced in, in my red
Coca-Cola bathing suit covered only by a pair of cut-off jean shorts. My grandfather
took one look at me, and then promptly chastised my mother for allowing me to be a free
walking billboard. I barely understood what he was talking about, but I clearly remember
not liking my bathing suit after that.
That scene from my childhood has stuck with me. Every time I make a clothing
purchase, I am extremely conscientious of where and how the logo appears. It seems that
these days you can not get away from this branding of advertisers. They “stamp” us with
their logos, and then we in turn judge, label, and congregate with people according to
these labels. We have yet to realize that the values we share with someone should matter,
not the brands we choose to buy.
Marketers have a moral obligation to stray away from propaganda techniques.
Ann McClintock states in an essay she wrote, that, “Propaganda is not necessarily
concerned with what is true or false, good or bad. Propagandists simply want people to
believe the messages being sent” (270). McClintock goes on to share a study which
found that five hundred advertising claims barrage each of us during an average
day(271). If we have five hundred messages battling our senses everyday there should be
truth in them. Advertisers are subtly lying to us, manipulating our senses for their own
greed; the sad part is we are letting them. In the first paragraph of McClintock’s essay
she speaks of the brainwashing that marketers use to bomb us with images. She also
states that even those of us that know better, that know what is going on, allow these
messages to permeate our subconscious (270). Why would we do this? “They work
because they appeal to our emotions, not to our minds” (275), McClintock explains.
We, adults, should know better. We are educated, informed, and can rationally
make, or not make, our own decisions. However, children do not have all the tools yet to
make their own prudent decisions. Marketers have latched on to a new target group, even
coming up with their own name for these individuals, tweens (Hymowitz 203). Kay
Hymowitz asserts that, these are children between the ages of eight to twelve who are
“leaning more and more toward teen styles, teen attitudes, and, sadly, teen behavior at its
most troubling” (203). Instead of projecting clean, innocent fun at these children,
advertisers are capitalizing on their desire to look and act older. Hymowitz declares,
marketers have found in their research, “that by the time they are twelve, children
describe themselves as flirtatious, sexy, trendy, athletic, and cool. . . scorning any
symbols of their immaturity” (203).
These advertisers have a choice. They can target their ads to these children, and
teach them morals and values accepted by society. Or, they can continue to exploit these
tweens’ confusion of themselves, and drive them to want more of the advertiser’s
products in order to achieve the “cooldom” that the tweens are longing for.
Unfortunately, the marketer’s decision for exploitation harms these children more
than they understand. Hymowitz goes on to explain that younger children are having
more adult problems; one of these is eating disorders. She determined that this stems
from a “pre-mature fashion-consciousness” (205). Their young, confused minds, in order
to fit in and be cool, are harming their bodies to meet the standard for normal the media
and marketers portray. Hymowitz contends that due to parents not being around as much,
and a “sexualized and media-driven marketplace,” parental influence is lessening. This
makes these tweens susceptible and defenseless to peer pressure in order to conform
(206).
Marketers and advertisers could alleviate these problems with clear cut guidelines
towards advertising to children. The problem with this is there are no clear cut child and
adult worlds anymore. Our children are exposed to everything. I challenge you to watch a
recent, media-hyped, blockbuster movie meant as family entertainment, and not find very
adult hidden references hidden throughout it. Marketers place these barbs in family
movies so parents will want to take their children; so everyone will have a good time.
The problem is the more intuitive children pick up on them. These children, striving to be
more adult-like, then carry these ideas to school and inflict them upon other children.
Now these children who are inflicted upon feel the pressure to grow up and fit in,
completing a very vicious circle.
The real solution to these issues would simply be the truth. If companies would
spend their money on creating a better product they would not need to invest billions of
dollars in the corrupt advertising sect; their product would speak for itself. Instead of
trying to manipulate the general public with their invasive tactics and evasive maneuvers,
try to bombard us with something worth buying. Unfortunately, too many companies feel
that if they create a superior product they would lose money. In fact, what these
companies fail to realize is, in creating something of worth, they would garner a loyal fan
base.
We, adults also, need to create our own solutions. We need to stop allowing
propagandists from taking advantage of our lazy selves. We have to research the claims
brought on by advertisers, and not allow them to make our decisions. “Otherwise, we
have consented to handing over to others our independence of thought and action” (275),
as McClintock so aptly put it. That will be construed as a victory for the other side.
Works Cited
Hymowitz, Kay S. “Tweens: Ten Going on Sixteen.” The Longman Reader 8th ed. Eds.
Judith Nadell, John Langan, and Eliza A. Comodromos. New York: Pearson/Longman, 2007: 202-206
McClintock, Ann. “Propaganda Techniques in Today’s Advertising.” The Longman
Reader 8th ed. Eds. Judith Nadell, John Langan, and Eliza A. Comodromos. New York: Pearson/Longman, 2007: 270-275
Today, I decided, was the day to pull some carrots, we will eat them for dinner. I have to admit I have never grown carrots before but these seemed to grow themselves, I am quite pleased with them. I wasn't sure when they would be ready so I have been pulling them periodically. They very rarely make it inside, I usually brush them off and eat them while still in the garden. They are tender and sweet, there is just nothing like food you have grown yourself. I encourage you all to try and grow something today, just ask for any advice or tips and I will do my best to help you out. I am a self proclaimed reformed black thumb, if I can do it anyone can. Enjoy the pictures and we will enjoy the carrots.
